Week 5 writing

Quick write

There was money everywhere, and there was people that came inside the house with some rubbish bags. They put the money inside the rubbish bags, as they were putting the money in the rubbish bags they heard a big noise BANG! one of them asked “What’s that noise?” The other person replied “ It was a door.” After a few of the bags were full they would rush outside to put it into the van. They needed the money to buy a new house, new clothes, new car, and new furniture. As they were filling the rest of the bags they heard another BANG!

Last week we started writing a story with dialogue in our books. Then today we had to make a new document and copy the story from our books into the document. After doing that we had to add draft to our story. Draft stands for delete, rearrange, adding, fix and talk. Once we where finished we had to blog it.