This week for inquiry we had to write a letter from the trenchers.We had to imagine that we were in the trenchers and how it felt.We had to find information from captain charlie may's diary.I wrote my letter to my brother.
Hi Jorja Your letter you wrote in the trenches sounded really good. It had really good use of dialogue and your layout of your letter was awesome. You should check out my ANZAC letter I wrote http://pbsmiat.blogspot.co.nz/2016/04/anzac-letter.html I think next time you can add more to your blurb to let the people that read your blog have more information about your peice of work.
Hi Jorja
ReplyDeleteYour letter you wrote in the trenches sounded really good. It had really good use of dialogue and your layout of your letter was awesome. You should check out my ANZAC letter I wrote http://pbsmiat.blogspot.co.nz/2016/04/anzac-letter.html
I think next time you can add more to your blurb to let the people that read your blog have more information about your peice of work.